what-are-even-humans: ironinkpen: break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re …
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what-are-even-humans: ironinkpen: break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re …
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