apollostowel:

apollostowel:

Assuming just makes an ass out of them. That’s why I started reading twice when I edit books. I can mark the stuff that might be a problem, then know for sure at the end of that bit.

FWIW, I thought it was very clear with the pained looks tossed even to Glenn, that the problem…

Well it reads like it was written by someone who knows WTF they’re doing. These characters are three-dimensional, wonderful, wonderfully flawed. I’d hate to lose them as Malcolm and Clara, but it stands by itself as its own story too. I squee when I see a new chapter notification. Nah I thought it was clear why she’d be devolved into nervous laughter while he stalls, and how this might be giving themselves away here… but WTF are they actually doing that’s wrong? Nothing. But their happiness is their own little island and anyone could understand the terror of having that invaded. And in relationships complicated by this level of ambition, love isn’t enough, as you touched on in previous chapters. Will we see her push her hand a bit more with the argument of “Why do you stay in this job?” I feel like it’s coming eventually. Or is it that she knows the answer even if at the fall, he kinda doesn’t.

You don’t have to answer all this stuff, I know, spoilers. But it’s that good, I think about this stuff in between chapter postings. 🙂

Me, too! I think about this stuff between chapter postings as well. Like, I am convinced the “Why do you stay in this job?” is around the corner or some evolution…and michelle should catch up on the whole thread before reblogging… but yes, I wish FFN did have that feature, 😦